Rapunzel sentence changing
original: One day the woman was standing at this window and she saw the most beautiful Rapunzel in a bed.
my sentence: The beautiful girl was staring at an amazing Rapunzel in desperate need to grab it out of the soil. she could smell the musty scent of the old house as the bitter taste of dust settled on her tongue. "darling I'm cooking rice for dinner!" she heard still staring at the flower.
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