Pet writing topic

This week we have a topic about pets, for that I wrote an entertaining story about my pets

Hi, my name is Fejoa and I am a family cat in the Whetter-
Heney family. Today I’m going to tell you a little story about me. 

So, it all started one peaceful evening at home and the
family was stuffing those rubbery sticks with weird,

straw stuff at the end, in their mouths. the big hairy one

(that they called Dad) came into the really big room where

everyone always goes to (I think it's called the lounge?) and

turned off the bright thingys on the roof, when they do that I

always find a nice cosy place to sleep, mainly by the

hot, orange, glowing thing, this time had found my my spot and

was slowly going to sleep, then I heard a soft scrunchy sound

next to me (I think I was in this thing called a bag bean or

something, I couldn't see, it was pitch black) but I didn’t think

much of it. I started going to sleep again and then I was woken

up again! By some footsteps this time, they were coming from

the hallway, “oh, they must be coming to get a cup of water or

something” I thought. When they came in they turned the

lights on and I looked beside me. Suddenly I realised what had

made that noise before! it was my annoying sister! That little

sneak had snuck into the bag bean bag when it was dark. Now

you may be wondering “where did the sister come from?” well,

when the Heney, Whetters came to the SPCA they got both of

us because they “didn’t want to separate us” but honestly I’d

rather live without Sally (that's her name) we do not like each

other, she always gets all the attention just because she does

not show the humans how cool her claws are. “You should

have seen the look on Fejoa’s face when she saw Sally in a

one metre radius of her!” The human called Tui kept saying. 

So that is my story for you <3 Fejoa