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"leave me alone i want to watch the lights in the sky!" cried Nattily. " no, you can't!" yelled her mother Elena. " but i want to!" she stormed, the wind howled like a ghost it was cold and dark it was nine o"clock at night, way past Nattily's bed time. No Nattily! it dangerous you can get crushed by those meteorites!" she screamed at the top of her lungs as Nattily walked further and further into the darkness suddenly a meteorite hit the ground BOOOOOOM!!!! "NOOOOOOOOOOOO" screamed Elena tears building up in her eyes. "aghhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!" yelled Nattily...
To be continued....
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