Thursday, August 16, 2018

Quick Write-show don't tell

we only had five minutes to complete this


NO:i was happy.
YES: the look on her face was full of cheerfulness and glee.  the faces of the people around her  lit up with delight and pride as well.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Tui

    You did a great job of doing Show dont Tell.
    How do you think you did?

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.